I love the RJ logo, it's well done and has a real "outdoors-man" feel to it. I also like the Gray Away and while I do like the gradient I think you need a richer brown color to sell this. Tween Diva is perfection! Those fonts are so great. You nailed this demographic. I also enjoy the grunge font for the studio logo but, and this would also apply to Gray Away, why so much of the background space? This works for the RJ logo but, for me, the other two are a little overwhelming. Otherwise, I believe you thought carefully about all four demographics and these designs are successful.
I really like the colors of fourth logo. Orange and dark gray always work well together. For the Tween Diva, I think, maybe, it would look better to make "tween a little bigger, or move it into another spot. Try putting it on the level with the dot of the letter "i" maybe?
I like the CSB studio logo, thats my fav. Could of made it stand out a little more if you cropped the border a lot more. I really like its simplicity though. Would look great on letter head. My least fav might be the Grey Away. Just might be need to be a little more rich in the colored background. It does looks very clean though. Maybe crop the bounding box to make it a little more focused also.
All of these came out nice I could right away who they are for. I like the RJ's one I think you could even take the gun away and it would be cool the way that you put the R and J together looks nice and with the background you can tell its and outdoors brand. The tween diva one also came out nice looks exactly like a tag that I would see at some young girls clothing store.
Nice work. I agree with some of the others here that the rifle could be simplified or even removed from the RJ logo. I would also suggest moving the J down just a little bit too so it isn't misread as a whole as the letter 'B.'
I love the RJ logo, it's well done and has a real "outdoors-man" feel to it. I also like the Gray Away and while I do like the gradient I think you need a richer brown color to sell this. Tween Diva is perfection! Those fonts are so great. You nailed this demographic. I also enjoy the grunge font for the studio logo but, and this would also apply to Gray Away, why so much of the background space? This works for the RJ logo but, for me, the other two are a little overwhelming. Otherwise, I believe you thought carefully about all four demographics and these designs are successful.
ReplyDeleteI really like the colors of fourth logo. Orange and dark gray always work well together. For the Tween Diva, I think, maybe, it would look better to make "tween a little bigger, or move it into another spot. Try putting it on the level with the dot of the letter "i" maybe?
ReplyDeleteI like the CSB studio logo, thats my fav. Could of made it stand out a little more if you cropped the border a lot more. I really like its simplicity though. Would look great on letter head. My least fav might be the Grey Away. Just might be need to be a little more rich in the colored background. It does looks very clean though. Maybe crop the bounding box to make it a little more focused also.
ReplyDeleteI like the overall design of the RJ logo, but maybe try and simplify the rifle. It's a bit too realistic and throws off the image a bit.
ReplyDeleteAll of these came out nice I could right away who they are for. I like the RJ's one I think you could even take the gun away and it would be cool the way that you put the R and J together looks nice and with the background you can tell its and outdoors brand. The tween diva one also came out nice looks exactly like a tag that I would see at some young girls clothing store.
ReplyDeleteNice work. I agree with some of the others here that the rifle could be simplified or even removed from the RJ logo. I would also suggest moving the J down just a little bit too so it isn't misread as a whole as the letter 'B.'
ReplyDeleteGrey away is a smart play on whit hair. i like it and will definitely catch peoples attention for their age groups.
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