I had a lot of difficulty with the adult oman logo, i wanted to go with a nice eye for cosmetics, but it didn't come out how i wanted it.
The last is a minimalist take on a T-shirt company, it is directed toward young adult males and even the young at heart. It has a stream lined look, and an ambiguous name.
I like the pizza place one because I also used an exclamation point as the logo, so I guess we think alike! lol
ReplyDeleteThe rest are cool too, I think you did a good job on the eye. We're barely learning so yeah. Try it again in a few weeks and you might do as good as you wanted to.
I like the eye logo and the princess playtime! I think the T-shirt design could use some layout adjustment the way the text overlaps.
ReplyDeleteI think the eye turned out good, but maybe try and straighten up the text a bit.
ReplyDeletethe text on the eye was done by hand, so i can definitely see why it would need to be fixed some lol
DeleteI think you're really going somewhere with the cosmetic logo - the eye is very "eye' catching. LOL The text just needs a little work is all.
ReplyDeleteThe Lauren Lean Cosmetics Looks like a real brand. it could even work for a spa logo i think.
ReplyDeleteI would wear a shirt that Raw logo. Good job on all three logos but I'd like to see your fourth!
ReplyDeleteAll the ideas and concepts are great. My fav would be the Raw clothing line. Simple, easily branded on pretty much anything. Great job. The Pop Princess needs some tweaking I think. Maybe the exclamation point needs to be wider to create more negative space. Overall great looks though.
ReplyDeleteGreat concepts but you need to work on the layouts and use of negative space to avoid things washing each other out.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy the Cosmetics logo with the eye it looks clean and I like the hand written feel of the words came out nice. On the other two maybe try pulling the wording away from circle shape so it is more easily read. Or try using a different color to make it easier to read. nice work!
ReplyDeleteI like the designs and concepts. The "Raw" one would benefit from some tinkering tho. I think it would look more clear if the "R" on the graphic was white, and the graphic itself was a little more centered.
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