I really like the background on the first one- however what I don't like about these two collectively is that they seem very much like the same design- with just a little tweak of the letters and taking off the gradient. I don't really see how this conveys who you are but maybe with a bit of explanation it'll be different.
I like the way the first "ESAI" floats above the stream of words . . . the words I see are reason, logic, method, think. I really love your treatment of the "A", very cool. Although, I think the "S" gets a litte lost because of the similar color of the background. The second one seems like a negative image of the first, maybe you took "opposite" too literally. LOL, Overall though, nice technique.
On the top one the colors work well with each other and it flows well together. For the bottom image one suggestion would be maybe to use a lighter shade of black so that the res of the letters will be seen easier. nice work!
I like how you used a similar concept for both names and made it so very different. I would also try to change fonts on the second design tho, just to see it it will look better or not.
I really like the background on the first one- however what I don't like about these two collectively is that they seem very much like the same design- with just a little tweak of the letters and taking off the gradient. I don't really see how this conveys who you are but maybe with a bit of explanation it'll be different.
ReplyDeleteI like the way the first "ESAI" floats above the stream of words . . . the words I see are reason, logic, method, think. I really love your treatment of the "A", very cool. Although, I think the "S" gets a litte lost because of the similar color of the background. The second one seems like a negative image of the first, maybe you took "opposite" too literally. LOL, Overall though, nice technique.
ReplyDeleteThe different styles throughout the letters is cool. I am not sure what it is you were going for as far as the assignment goes, but it's neat.
ReplyDeleteOn the top one the colors work well with each other and it flows well together. For the bottom image one suggestion would be maybe to use a lighter shade of black so that the res of the letters will be seen easier. nice work!
ReplyDeletethis is very interesting, the bottom one is hard to see due to the dark colors of it all, but it has a nice effect, rather chaotic
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure if the 2nd design is pushing "the opposite" part far enough, but they are both nice designs.
ReplyDeleteI like both designs but there are very similar in appearance.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used a similar concept for both names and made it so very different. I would also try to change fonts on the second design tho, just to see it it will look better or not.
ReplyDeleteWell done, I think your saying that you are put together and have a thought pattern on the first one and the opposite is disheveled? Good job
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